Hi, my name is Maya Lee. And today, I ‘m
going to write an assignment about Joseph Kony, and my opinions about making
him famous.
Okay, you may know Joseph Kony, or you may
not. So I’ll explain about Joseph Kony.
Joseph Kony is the head of the Lord’s
Resistance Army(LRA). An Ugandan guerrilla group. Kony has been accused by
government entities of ordering the abduction of children to become child-sex
slaves, and child soldiers. An estimated 66,000 children became soldiers and
two million people have been internally displaced since 1986.(Source:Wikipedia).
The film—“kony2012” is made by Jason
Russell. Director and founder of some site called—“Invisible children”.
Mr.Russell promised young boy named Jacob Acaye.(Who was kidnapped by LRA)that
he will do everything to “stop Kony”. But sadly, many people don’t know about
Kony, which I think we should make him more famous that people will be
interested in.
Now,
I want to share my opinions about this video. I think that making him famous is
a very good idea. This famous depends on “the purpose of this video”. And there’s
only one answer—For the Ugandan children who is suffering much pain right now.
Some people say that this video is for the resources etc.etc. But we saw the
video, and we saw the promise of Mr. Russell. Ugandan children is sacred of
what will happen next. And I think we should do whatever it takes to save them
from Kony. For that, making him famous is a right way to do it. When there’s
something famous, people watch more and more and more. Then, they begins to
feel excitements. And in this Kony situation, they becomes furious about Kony,
That they join the campaign.
Also, the best part of Invisible children’s
video was the building schools and creating jobs platform. Teach the Ugandan
children about peace and give them the tools to fight fair for democratic
nation. Mostly located in another nations. They don’t belong where they’re
supposed to belong. They’re holding guns instead of books.
But
there are some people who disagree with the video—“Kony 2012”. But they’re just
disagreeing because they’re afraid of what the LRA will do. They think that
they will be more powerful when they’re out of the hiding place. But, your word
can be more powerful than guns. Their army is much smaller than ours. The whole
world became one. And the Ugandan children is depending on us. So, let’s join
this campaign that will change this world.
So I
think that making famous is a good idea. Ugandan children is waiting for your
help, This campaign is not for us, it’s for the Ugandan children. And I think
we should keep doing it, for the Ugandan children, and for the world.
Your draft is great!
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This is well-written and you present some good arguments. Try not to use etc. in the essay but rather explain the point. It's good that you also included opposing views and a rebuttal. Great work!
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